This is the Official Teaser for Suite 251 and my Pilot.
I had this one ready but Meg died and I felt that I shouldn't post this one...
But I thought about it and deep inside I know that she would like to see it posted...
I would like to Thank my Ladies:
Sam, Vickey for their help and support when I was writing this one.
My Beta Krys for support and tips..
Chanty and Nina because they have read this Pilot and loved it..
For that I am damn proud because Nina is a Master in writing M-rated Stories...
So here is the Official Teaser...Enjoy...
Twilight belongs to Stephanie Meyer, but any and all characterizations, plots and such belong to me, along with my original work and articles. No copying or reproduction of said work is permitted unless written authorization has been given. ©2010 ArcCleo (aka Cleopatra F.) All rights reserved worldwide.
Hotel Angelic – Suite 251
Then I saw him coming in, he was naked, so beautiful in his glory that I gasped. He looked at me with a wicked smile on his face. It might be dark but I could feel his smirk.
"See something you like?"
He was teasing me. I couldn't take my eyes off his toned muscles. Have you ever seen a Greek Statue? A naked man in such great detail that you shiver from the intensity of the art. I had in front me a Greek God, an Apollo. He was coming towards me never taking his gaze off my face.
"I didn't want to wake you up."
"I was a bit cold. It is not your fault."
"Ξαπλωμένη σε τούτο το κρεβάτι είσαι ένα Όραμα
Που θέλω να συνεχίσω να βλέπω κάθε πρωί
Μην φύγεις από κοντά μου μείνε εδώ
Δίχως εσέ θα νιώθω μόνος και λειψός... "
It was so hot listening to him whispering words in Greek, even though I didn't know what he was saying to me. It turned me on. Suddenly, the room felt so hot .
"What did you say? It was so beautiful."
He came to the bed and sat next to me. He took the blanket off my body. I was naked like he was. He traced circles between my breasts. My nipples grew hard from his attention. I whimpered as I felt his touch. He took one of my nipples into his fingers and squeezed it lightly, I moaned.
"You are a vision."
He continued his ministrations and all my whole body was on fire. He was teasing me, but I wanted more.
"Edward, please."
When he took my nipple into his mouth I gasped. I arched my back inviting him in me. I wanted more, I wanted to feel him inside me. I wanted to feel complete.
"Ομορφιά μου, το σώμα σου έχει πάρει φωτιά
Θέλω τόσο να σε κάνω δικιά μου
Μα στον έρωτα δεν προστάζει βιασύνη καμιά..."
His husky voice telling me these verses while he had his tongue on my nipples, sucking and biting brought me near to my orgasm.
8 comments:
I am rather steady in reading Cleo's work. And I am lucky enough to be able and read the whole story from the very first step.
I saw her idea transforming in her mind and finally getting the way it is reaching you today! I was very satisfied being a part of all this and really glad to be able to read in it a new Cleo.
I believe that she has made a very big step in her way of writing and hopefully she will keep great company to us.
Keep on writing girl!
Nasty!!!
Great idea to put in Greek it's gonna spice the story up!
A greek God??? Gosh I wonder who that could be...
*giggles*
Cool writing sweets!!
The Little Devil ;)
love the greek to (although we had to put in trough a translator...lol)
cant wait to read the whole story...
XXX
Hi,
this looks like the beginning of something amazing. I like the style and the mystery surrounding it!
And yes, the greek phrases help create the flow :) Keep them!
Meg is smiling down on you, I'm sure. She's proud of you.
ttfn
Ardanwen
Hey hun u took my breath away i loved it they way it so sultry and seductive. The Greek phrases add romance depth and intrigue. u know i think ur the best writer out there. U know how to get us going!! cant wait to read more
Luv Chrissy
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UMM I DIED! SOOO GOOD!!! THIS IS THE ADULT TWILIGHT WE SHOULD HAVE GOT! GREAT WORK HUN!!! LOVE U!
From the very first moment I was sure it was going to be a hit. And guess what?? I'm right!
Love it Cleo...go Edward, go Greece!
Keep up the good work babygirl.
xxx
Sam
Great work - waiting for the rest :)
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